We are learning to do persuasive writing and this is my work comment down what you think I got wrong.
What am I arguing to write and why?
Is it okay to give everyone the invincibility potion or not.
DUDE NO!
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1.
(PEE)
Life risking side-effects
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Reason…
What if these side effects are life risking?
These side effects could lend to mental body issues and almost impossible to cure.
If a potion/drug is just newly made and not tested no one knows what could happen?
Such potion/drug is very dangerous just from having a random effect.
GAMBLING YOUR LIFE FOR INVINCIBILITY?
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2. (PEE)
World revolutionary
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Reason…
What would happen if everyone uses this drug even if it has no side effects or what so ever.
Most of the time most people uses this for crime and harmful reasons.
These actions can cause a lot of damage all around the world also they
Could use this for terrorist attacks unnoticed
I DON'T WANT TO GET INVOLVED IN THAT.
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3.
(PEE)
Accidents
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Reason…
Let's say you’re walking in the streets and no one can see you what would happen?
What about you’re in the kitchen and you can't see your hand and chopped your whole arm off. Yeah not so surprising.
WHAT'S WRONG CAN'T SEE YOURSELF?
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Ending
(No new information)
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I’m quite scared giving this drug to others now.
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