Narrative Writing Reborn as a Machine

Reborn as a Machine

At night time Jeremy(an old man) decided to walk with his pet dog, Jeff to the park after Jeremy heard his health problems. Jeremy has a stomach cancer and he only has 3 months to live. While he was walking at the park, he stopped and thinks to himself “what am I going to do with the remaining 3 months of my life?” a few moments later he got hit by an alien spaceship going through a warp drive. The aliens were shocked, they did not want to bother the life that is currently happening in earth so they turned Jeremy into a humanoid robot thinking that it was the best choice.

At least 3 hours passed, Jeremy wakes up again and thought something happened, he walked back to his house and into his room with Jeff,(Jeff was running around the park so he didn’t get hit by the spaceship) Jeff started barking at Jeremy, Jeremy asked what was wrong. And the reply he got? A bite on his hand. After taking that bite his entire arm transformed into a gun and started shooting out what he ate yesterday, he was shocked about what happened so he tries to forget what just happened a moment ago. 

The next day he went back to the doctors to get himself scanned and what appeared on the screen was his entire body colored in white, the doctors were thinking if the machine was broken, he walks away anxiously and went back to the park at the exact time he went yesterday. He saw a homeless man(bob)calling on a telephone post, he was calling his X-wife for another chance with her, and he got his second chance. 

Bob was asleep in the park underneath a hut until he wakes up with a group of high school boys that started attacking him with loads of explosive fireworks, he tries to keep everything he owns safe(even trash, that's how desperate he is) but the fire from the fireworks started spreading in a ridiculous rate and burnt everything he has, he ducked on the ground holding the old photo of him and his wife and whispered ”Sophia, forget about me and live a happy life, Goodbye”.

Jeremy started hearing explosions from far away distances and he decided to go where the noise is coming from. He finds himself where bob is getting attacked by the high school boys, he started walking in front of the boys and all the boys started aiming the fireworks at him and started firing. the moment he got there the boys hit him at the head with a bat, he got knocked out and fell onto the ground, the boys were thinking ”Is he dead?” and all of them started laughing at him and walked towards Bob.

At the back of Jeremy’s head, an eyeball resembling a camera popped out and scanned the faces of the students and got all their student ID’s. Before the boys hit Bob with their bats Jeremy’s back opened up revealing weird alien like technology and started firing laser-like rockets near them, all of them started running away and one of them stopped, Jeremy started scanning his face and hacked his ”twitter” account and uploaded a video of them attacking Bob, he even hacked all devices in New York and played the video of them attacking Bob, he even uploaded their ID’s with the video!

Bob was thankful for Jeremy saving his life, Jeremy was so proud that he saved a man’s life and decided that he would help everyone, Jeremy realized something weird. He couldn’t find his dog Jeff, he started seeing things with his artificial eye and he tries to find Jeff with it. The moment he got to where Jeff is, he saw Jeff with a massive burn and a lost limb. Jeremy desperately tries to heal him with his new profound abilities, he got Jeff’s limb back together, stopped the bleeding and fixed his burns but Jeff's heart already stopped so there was no point on healing him. Jeremy decided that he wouldn’t just catch all the evildoers but he would also punish them for the things they’ve done.

R.I.P Jeff 2004-2017

Bonus

Bob was talking to Jeremy.
Bob: Have you ever been bullied before?
Jeremy: Yeah, I have before, In high school that is.
Bob: Oh really? what did you do about it?
Jeremy: I told the teachers and he got in major trouble.
Bob: What happened after that?
Jeremy: For some reason every time I see him he says"Guacamole I'm Handsomole"
Bob: Seriously?!
Jeremy: Just kidding! He's dead~

KOWHATUTOI kete arts

W.A.L.T: to draw whakahua for kowhatu toi.
-Koru
-Niho Taniwha
-RapeRape
-RitoRito
-Mangorape
-Manawa

At the start we discussed different maori designs and started doing some sketching of them, we did the koru first.

What Am I?

I am your friend, but you don’t know that.

I follow you, but you don't notice me.

I disappear when there's no light.

I appear when light illuminates near you.

I am nothing but a shape of darkness.

I  hide from the light while following you, and when you look at me, there’s nothing but a hollow light.

If I was alive, if I could speak, if I have colors, if I was moving in the light without hiding, if I could stay in the dark without disappearing… I would be you… But still… I am permanently attached to you.

B.A.A.L Tinkercad creation

This is a new creation by me again...
only made it in a short time of 2 days. I am actually impressed of my self.
This creation is in the same game as God Hand, my other creation.
The game that this thing came from is called Titans, a very unpopular game.
But the game itself is good even if it is a rip off of Vega Conflict, but still, its a good game.

My letter writing (don't take this offensive VC players)

Matthew Alegre

180 Waterloo road

Hornby

Aug-8-2017

Dear CEO of KixEye.

I am writing this to you because I really want to argue about something, especially on a certain game,Vega Conflict. The game you made is being completely ruined and the changes you made had an extreme negative impact on the game, by the unbalancement and the new things you are adding into it, like the Xeno technology and Gaming Restrictions, you are slowly ruining the good qualities of the game.

Restrictions.

The Vega conflict game used to be a fun game because there was very little restrictions into it, until you added restrictions for Iron Star only, Demon Corps only, Xeno Division only ETC. Adding many restrictions make the game less exciting and enjoyable, but some restrictions you added in the game, which we can understand like destroyers only and 1 thruster per ship, but adding so many restrictions is not fair. My advice here is, all tech from rebels to demon corps should not have any restriction excluding iron star company, just think about the positivities that’ll change the game.

Customer Satisfaction & Service.

In the game you developed, Kixeye , you added a certain event called “Civil War”, that event is not to reward the best players, but the best “money payers”. What I mean by that is the event is more about getting your fleets destroyed and completely wasting the player's money “real money” to instantly repair their fleets. If you want to fix this mess, you’ll have to either increase the reward, increase the points gained, or decrease the repair/refit time by at least 50% including the coining price.

I know a YouTuber called Manni and plays your game and he spent 2000$ while playing your game, within only 2 years and what he said was “If you could at least maximize the points gained per victory, it would make a positive change in the game”.

Paragraph 3: Upcoming Divisions.

Currently you are adding technology that new players can’t get and are way more powerful than the other divisions you’ve released in the game which will change the gating rule “dramatically”. The current division you are releasing is the xeno division, the xeno division has more imbalanced statistics and upgrades, Then there’s the Axis season that is in a complete different dimension that ruins the whole game. My advice for you to fix this outbreak is to reduce the stats of the upcoming divisions, rather than just jumping a meter to a mile.

Term 3 Review : Graduate Profile

T3 Review



AL#3 - I have done well remembering the steps I have to do after finishing one step and keeping on track of what to do and how to do it.

LS#2 - I am very close in achieving this goal because I work a lot of the time and put more effort into the work. I didn't manage to achieve it because I sometime get disturbed and go off track on what to do.



T3 Goals



LS#2 - I will work harder to achieve this goal every time because I can't get myself to keep on doing what I am supposed to do and not getting side track.

TS#4 - I am trying to make myself think creatively because most of the time my brain thinks plain like a computer and does things the way I know it .

God-Hand Tinkercad creation

Guys I made a new creation! :D
Took me like 12 hours over all on making this thing.
If you guys have any cool ideas on a new creation please comment down bellow.
So I made A cannon Type and a plasma type. 2 more to go!!!😮